Wednesday 14 November 2012

THE FALSE TRUTH pt1

As you all know, I write as a hobby, and since I've not been published I think I should share one of my short stories with you, so that you can judge whether I should quit my day job and take up writing(Lol!)
Don't worry, just read and let me know what you think, I don't bite! This one is a short story titled,
"The False Truth" its in a compilation called A Mouthful Of Silence (AMOS) Enjoy!


THE FALSE TRUTH

The meeting finally ended at three-fifteen that Friday afternoon, Ada’s head was pounding, even as she nodded into the phone she winced and gestured to her secretary to drop the documents and messages she brought into the emptying office, she was the branch manager of a first generation bank.
Assuring Mrs. Ogbodo that the bank stocks were not really dropping she smiled weakly as she finally replaced her phone and took a sip from her mug of tepid coffee, she gagged and placed it down grimacing and opened her top drawer and reached for the bottle of Aleve she kept specially there for days like this.
Whenever she was having her period, her head pounded, her skin grew hot and cold and she suffered double visions, she was afraid to go to the hospital because she was sure she will find out they were symptoms of the big C, so she suffered and swallowed pain-killers her husband sent her from Canada. She endured more of the bitter fluid to wash down the slim pill.
She shook her head and groaned in regret, she had to stop abusing her body like this.
Her secretary came in again and her desk phone started ringing simultaneously, she grabbed the phone and dropped it back on the cradle, “what now, Chichi?” she asked as she looked at her through hooded eyes, “sorry ma, your gate man called, he said it was urgent, you should call him as soon as you can” she said and slowly retreated thankfully taking the half drank cup of coffee with her. Ada sighed, Daudu, her gateman was melodramatic, he called everything urgent.
The last time the PHCN people visited and threatened to cut their electricity, he had called and announced it as ‘urgent’ , when her mother-in-law came to stay for two weeks two months ago, she had been called approximately four times daily because of one ‘urgent’ excuse or the other.
She blamed herself for buying the idiot a phone and actually recharging it. Frowning she reached for her mobile phone and found out he had also called her fourteen times there, she hissed and dropped the phone, she had too much to do, she decided to tackle most of the documents and soon was lost until Chichi came in to say goodnight.
She looked up with a squint, she really needed to visit an optician, her eyes were getting worse she thought as she blinked at the wall clock, it read 8:45 and she rubbed her eyes to remove the black spots as she bade Chichi goodnight.
Stretching her lean arms above her small head, she grabbed her phone which was still on silent and stuffed some of the documents into her laptop bag and shut down her Sony Vio lap top, then reaching for the desk phone she told her driver John to bring the car around to the front of the building.
By the time she made it down from her eight floor office with the elevator, John was waiting slightly panicky, for her in the almost deserted lobby, “what is it John?” she asked as she took in his worried expression, “Madam, I don dey call you since” he replied as he hastily stepped forward and took her laptop bag and her hand bag from her,
“Proper English John, I’ve warned you!” she scolded, she hated when he addressed her in pidgin English, “Na Aisha, madam” John replied ignoring her warning as he rushed forward to get the door for her, “my daughter?” she asked blankly, “yes ma, she faint, dem don rush am go hospital na im we dey call you for since” he continued as they got to the car.
Ada halted as her stomach dropped and the taste of the coffee she took all day came back up, she struggled to swallow, “what” she said but her voice was weak and her throat too bitter, clearing her throat again, “what did they say is wrong with my child?” she asked a little stronger, John shrugged as he swung his car door open, “dem no know, but dem say if she no get blood, she go die” he replied as he entered into the car and expertly reversed and entered the already congested road.To Be Continued...

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